tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3872564965341429647.post8278121673744414988..comments2023-04-13T01:12:34.609-07:00Comments on Momentarily So.: GoodnightAkanksha Aryahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16359660958672776224noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3872564965341429647.post-47010656910309759162010-01-27T19:13:16.134-08:002010-01-27T19:13:16.134-08:00Interesting how the most bizarre of poems of yours...Interesting how the most bizarre of poems of yours can end up having a 'plot' so to speak. But I liked this because I felt the "I" could be so many different people, rather than just a lover. It's interesting to re-read the poem with different relationships in mind... <br /><br />At the same time though, I'd like it if you had some sort of structure, seriously. You sort of lose some meaning(and audience?) by being so inaccessible on a structural level. Just a thought... In fact, the opposite may also be true: the lack of structure could actually ADD meaning too. so, there...Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18211571535101815570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3872564965341429647.post-46719794722164776932009-11-13T12:29:35.055-08:002009-11-13T12:29:35.055-08:00Yes, I see glimpses of you in this poem. I'll ...Yes, I see glimpses of you in this poem. I'll encourage you to write more of this kind of poetry.Abhimanyuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555450407872121123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3872564965341429647.post-13173745842702029452009-08-06T22:48:04.430-07:002009-08-06T22:48:04.430-07:00You are obviously not the one who is narrating the...You are obviously not the one who is narrating the poem right? You are the girl...maybe :-??<br /><br />Beautifully written anyway >:D<Nirvanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02923973199703895303noreply@blogger.com